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Re: To Be Weak [EDITED]
Ooh I like the version. It shows the MC's passion and it seems more believable and the sentences flowed well. Favorite Sentence: Everywhere she touched made my bones melt to ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
Thanks Luccy. This critique was really helpful and I don't mind if you're nit-picky. It just gives me something to think about. I owe you some critiques now that you ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Half the Fun
Ah, I can't believe no one critiqued this. It sounds good against Maroon 5, it was sweet and short and I liked it as well. ~Angie :D
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 2
Merry I just love reading your critiques! If you guess who William's in love with, I think I will be baffled. I don't want anyone to know right away, but ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect
Thanks so much Merry! Yeah, though I like Jane Austen, I have no clear as to where this came from. Lets just say that when I started writing this, I ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 3
~Edited~
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {3}
Ah, your critique made me smile! Oh and you're in Spain, cool! I bet it beats being in the snow and the dreadfulness of fall. Well anyways, I am glad ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {3}
Thanks Conrad! This chapter is really just a breathing point, but hopefully you enjoyed it and that you'll continue to read. I understand if you are busy and you can't ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {2}
Thanks everyone for the reviews. I actually see some things that need to be edited, but I am lazy, as all writers are when it comes to these type of ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Connie's YWS Fan-Fic
*cracks up* Jeez, do I really sound like that? -Kylan Con really captured the essence of Ky, though we love him for his poetic brilliance. This deserves a star! ~Angel
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Side of the Moon - 1
I'll read this tomorrow. Thanks for the heads up!
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
Oops! didn't know I posted twice :oops: But thanks Ash! I just started adding to this today. Hmm its a good guess but you don't quite have it. I'm sorry ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Midnight to Dawn-Prologue
Thanks Ash, and I understand, school just takes up a lot time. The review was much appreciated, as always, and I'm so happy that you like it because I was ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
Attention! I have a lot of stories that I want to try and continue and this one happens to be on the top of my list. This is basically about ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
Attention! I have a lot of stories that I want to try and continue and this one happens to be on the top of my list. This is basically about ...
Nov 15, 2008